I read something tonight that inspired me to write a song. It kind of has a double meaning.
P.S. It's not finished. In fact it's not even revised yet. It's just kind of a whim...
I Still Love You
When the hurt of this world
Is too much to bear
When it seems like there’s
No one out there who cares
When your life is heading somewhere
Different than it should be
When you think you’re alone,
Just remember there’s still me
Chorus:
I still love you
In the darkness of the night
I still love you
When you’re trembling with fright
I still love you
When your world has turned to gray
I still love you
No matter what you say
5 comments:
I love this Jeni. Keep writing...
Very good, Jeni. It was comforting to read this.
Smokey says he still loves you, too . . .
Seriously, nice poem, Jeni. I enjoyed it and I don't think it needs much work.
i could put music to that. let me know , i love to do that kind of stuff. very pretty.
I think it's about time we put some music to this my friend.
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